Comments for joyfulrebellion.eng-3u http://blankman.edublogs.org Just another Edublogs.org weblog Sun, 04 Jan 2009 17:42:18 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 Comment on My essay!!! only late cause my comp is dumb!! by komox37 http://blankman.edublogs.org/2008/12/11/my-essay-only-late-cause-my-comp-is-dumb/comment-page-1/#comment-16 komox37 Sun, 04 Jan 2009 17:42:18 +0000 http://blankman.edublogs.org/?p=27#comment-16 1) You neglected to cite any of your quotes. 2) While you do use quotes and have a structured essay, it reads very choppy and lacks flow. 3) The religious aspects of this novel are often overlooked, particularly in light of Pi's cannibalism. I happy you chose this topic. 4) The essay does not meet the required length. T 3 A 1 C 2 K 2- 1) You neglected to cite any of your quotes.
2) While you do use quotes and have a structured essay, it reads very choppy and lacks flow.
3) The religious aspects of this novel are often overlooked, particularly in light of Pi’s cannibalism. I happy you chose this topic.

4) The essay does not meet the required length.

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]]> Comment on MY ESSAY TEST……… please excuse poor quality it was a bit rushed by komox37 http://blankman.edublogs.org/2008/10/28/my-essay-test-please-excuse-poor-quality-it-was-a-bit-rushed/comment-page-1/#comment-15 komox37 Mon, 03 Nov 2008 00:01:49 +0000 http://blankman.edublogs.org/?p=24#comment-15 A good job Zach. Despite the outline format, (can we get beyond that please, its costing you marks not to finalize it), you provide a good analysis of the movie. T 3- A 2 C 2+ K 3 A good job Zach. Despite the outline format, (can we get beyond that please, its costing you marks not to finalize it), you provide a good analysis of the movie.

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